Shore of small affluent to Musa River, Papua New Guinea

Hans-Georg Evers: Nice set-up with a good balance. More information desirable.

John Lenagan: This was a balanced composition with good triangulation of components, the open spaces were balanced the larger rocks and timber root composition which provided the retreat zones and seclusion. The overall presentation with the inclusion of the dynamic arrangement of the feature drift wood and well placed rounded river rocks was pleasing to the eye . The plant selection was a little odd, I woud have preferred to have seen Eleocharis dulcis and not the spral val. The Jarva fern would have worked better if there was a greater range in the sizes with smaller denser growth in the open areas where there is stronger water flow and if it was attached to the surface of wood or rocks would have appear more real. From the material recieved (video only and one picture) I sensed this arrangement could only be viewed from the front and not from all round, with the clear back ground the depth of field experience was lost and this resulted in a seamingly two dimensional composition which diminished the overall effect and took away from the realism. (Being able to see equipment in main view must be avoided).